Great post @lorylol, Although the images are not rendering, you can edit them in. I'm going to do a live tutorial this coming weekend in our Discord, for now, maybe you should try using the Ecency Hive dapp, it can help with your post formatting: https://ecency.com
Also, join and post in our group for more community upvotes:
https://peakd.com/c/hive-145415
*And try to use up all the tags, that's how content is found on the HIVE blockchain. You may be able to add 7 more.