Story is short and when you were planned ti write you might having few more things add on to it. Not just what you wrote like further explanation on developed a civilization and how it has been helping the the most selfish and greedy human creature living above the it, as you were just pointed about the war and how it destroying there/
And also good that you made it a point to mention the year too.
Any how good story and there is a flow in it.
Thank you! There is definitely more to this story to explore!
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