Ahhh this is such a wonderful idea! I was hoping for something from another perspective, but this, this is just so brilliant, you fully commit, and it works so wonderfully, and yet telling it entirely through the dialogue of two characters. It isn;t an easy thing to attempt and you pull it off so well. It creates this sense of intrigue and mystery, like, what is going on! What are these things inside a protective shell, it is enthralling the way it slowly unravels as a two little fishes, hatching and growing up, the mad assault of swimming through your food, you have so many wonderful details. I sincerely love it! The way you tell this is so entertaining, and then the sense of humor you weave between the two characters, it just makes it, along with that ending! Ahhh! This is just so much fun, and I really love the style it’s written in, oh I am so glad this one hooked you! ;)
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Thank you! The only greater pleasure than having written this story is to see that someone else had a great time reading it.