So many to choose, which one should I go for
Got hundreds of lethal weapons at my disposal
Make you a star with a subtle proposal
Radioactive dragon slaying rodents at Chernobyl
So be hopeful, I'm scoped in on the diamonds
Sneak right up behind 'em, know exactly where to find 'em
Thieves ain't near as silent, remind you I'm a pirate
Cyanide tipped virus take over with minimal violence
So keep me quiet, trying to make real changes
The last time I saw you, we got pretty dangerous
Surreal satisfaction like kissing the angels
Courageous and painless makes it highly contagious
Make fate rewrite the pages, I'm famous, I made this
I made this.
I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme in this piece and it showed really well, but the ending is what stuck with me the most. For me, the repeated lines have the statement a lot more weight. It was a great effect on the poem and a great way to end it.
Felt right, had it going to some beat in my brain :P
Yeah! Lovin' that flow.
Kinda provocative and punchy, eh? 😜
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