Hello @michalis
Wow! just Wow
I am in awe
It's like we are in sync. you know this movie right. Pacific Rim. The Jaeger pilots neural bridge thing.
yeah lol
Every step of the story was awesome. Kept me in the zone. Dang! i totally zoned in on this. I felt the story physically.
Saw what you did with the door thing. You pulled it off brilliantly. Hope it wasn't too tasking hahaha
this story is what I call true art
the transitioning shows your level of adroitness to pull this of.
BRAVO
This is full of energy, suspense and thrill.
"you name it"
I may consider to drop some contributions later on. but for now
I am lovin it
Cheers
I'll start with the same word as you:
Wow!
I really don't know how to respond to such amazing comments! Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked it. I haven't seen Pacific Rim though, but I think I got what you mean. Well, I'm really happy that I was able to put in words what you had in mind. Really happy!
And it's really amazing the process, trying to create something that will resonate with what two different people had in mind for the same story.
Looking forward to reading your suggestion for Chapter Three, along with everybody else's!!
Thanks again!
You have the most upovotes and haven't even made a suggestion yet! How do you do it??
Looking forward to it! Time is running out!
today fam, today