Please, take it further - that was the stepping-off point to bring in what was hinted at in the prologue. I felt that there were lots of tangential subplots so that you weren't written into a corner. Also, I consulted a Greek baby name book :) and while I live in Australia, I am Irish, so quite familiar with the European Union, and its politics etc. I'm in a different time zone to you, too, hence any delays in responding. Please, feel free to develop the chapter bones as you see fit. I am greatly enjoying the exercise. I read your prologue and chapter 1, woke up the next morning, and wrote my proposal. :-)
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