Thanks for the detailed feedback. I shot in manual mode; manual focus, and the end is black because I didn't trim the frames there.
I forgot about Resolve as a piece of the puzzle. Thanks for reminding me!
The only thing I want to achieve through time lapse is the message of "here is a section of time, mechanically captured; unaltered, and sequenced" it more about making the work represent this.
That's cool. I really hope to see a big timelapse community on steemit so I'm just happy the more people who post about it!