Dark Path
Walking in the path of loneliness,
Where everything is covered with darkness.
To a little boar in the forest,
With a face full of tears.
A poor lone boar roam from the somber,
'til his heart brokes a part.
For love, he is hunger,
to his body wrapped with anger.
But, it is never too late to start,
In overcoming a challenging dark path.
Teenagers' Voice
This poem is to give an emphasis to every teenagers. It described the life of the teenagers; struggles, sorrows, happiness, and excitement. In our present living, you may see us (teenagers) smiling, laughing, having fun but deep inside, we conquered all the guts. Facing different trials, challenges and obstacles makes us stronger. We've been broked, been degraded, been discriminated and wasted but see, we learned.
Time passed by, memories stocks. In all the failures we've made, there is always a time for changes, it is never too late to start over. Teenagers are known as the future of our society. We are the living hand of the nation and the body of the country. Its rough being teenager in this day and age but we are still fighting. Nothing can stop us from our dreams and no one can hinder our goals!
Lastly, leaving you a memorable qoute, " Better stop dreaming, just do it! ".
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Great day ahead steem world! God bless!
The lines above tells us that there are some points in our lives when it seems as though we are all alone in our dark world-- where it appears that are challenges are fast eating us up.
At such moments, what need is we love, and also to keep keeping on; because there's light at the end of the tunnel.
Great poem @tearsaw.
Thank you sir @degreatmyke :) *applause.
So beautiful! Gosh, you guys are so creative! This flashes everything about being a teenager.
I think what we search the most in our teens is love. We are hungry for love and we try hard to get it. That's why we travel on different paths to search for a trail for love. We sometimes fall into traps because of that. Emotions are powerful, aren't they?
Teenage is indeed a dark path and we have fight our way out. There will be a few bruises in the end but each of them will be a lesson to us. Never give up and fight your way to earn your place in the future :)
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Thank you maam :) so lucky being part of rhis contest :)
Thank you so much for appreciating my works :) 😍
OMG! You are so creative. You've got great writing skills. Since this is written in the view of a teenager, it tells a lot about this age period. Thanks for entering the contest and let's grow together on steemit. God bless!
thank you for appreciating my works:)) it was great man.😍
The poem pretty much sums up what a person goes through his/her teenage years. I love how you laid out the dark side of being a teenager, yet ended it with something bright. :) Keep it up and enjoy your teenage life! ^^