Your description is picturesque, auditory, olfactory and gustatory. Which is generally great, except when writing is intense enough that I smelled the loo! lol.
Excellent story. And a nice way to bring it back together at the end.
Your description is picturesque, auditory, olfactory and gustatory. Which is generally great, except when writing is intense enough that I smelled the loo! lol.
Excellent story. And a nice way to bring it back together at the end.
Gustatory I think may be my new favourite word. I LOVE it <3
Thanks for the lovely feedback.