I like your story ! That's true India look so appealing, to satisfy curiosity, this country is so singular ! I never been there, I wish I will have a sense of this country with your future post !
Regarding the story, i like the end with the pic of your balconnee, and the way you introduce it to, making people discover you're from Paris, and not Ireland. It's cool, and appealing, however the middle part with those details on the airport stuff, it's too casual in my opinion. Try to to tell an anecdote about, something funny, that don't happen every day. Or highlight your own discovery of travelling. You need a better angle for this part.
How do you deal with safety while travelling ? I wait a bit to travel in India because, I want to be ready for it. I'm curious about this point of your trip :) I have written an article with the way I use to protect me, my belongings and my data while travelling, maybe it can help you :) https://steemit.com/travel/@laazarus/7-steps-ways-to-travel-like-jason-bourne 
Thanks for sharing your opinion. I appreciate it, it allows me to gain a different perspective & therefore expand. I just read your article & honestly I don't have a method of safety like you do. I just trust that everything will be fine. Also, I will debunk the Indian myth here in my blog. Yes, best be cautious but as long as you don't provoke & attract bad energy towards yourself, all is good! It is a bad mind (meaning negative thoughts) that allows in all sorts of parasites as we are the creators & have full control over the matrix with our minds. It just depends where we are! As long as you feel safe inside, you can replicate this on the outside.
Yes sure, you're probably right, unless you have been to India, you will have a broken view of india regarding the security there. I agree totaly when you speak about bad energy. I speak a lot, and I don't like when people don't respect me. However I never been into a fight, or something, even if I'm out every night in dirty neighborhoud, it's about how you behave with people, that's all about it. Yes, I was sharing this, because it's my way to feel safe inside, and after I can go where I want, feeling good about it :)
Yes its all about behaviour & manners do come for free. Best to stay on the cautious side & be full of care. Thanks for sharing your post. I will keep in mind your 7 codes of safety when travelling next :)
Thanks you to make us discover india :) I look forward to see your pic, colors are awesome there. I wish you the best for you trip.