Great one to start with, but sad ending is a disappointing after all those beautiful incidents and the knowing the future things because of an unknown creature.
I guess Kiara would have taken care when Sally asked about monsters the night before as everything before that had been true as per future prediction by Sally through Arpito.
Great man, if you would agree, reveal the reason behind sad ending.
I know sad ending is disappointing but stay tuned to know what had happened and what happens further.
Thanks for your comment.Thanks @coolguy123. I am overwhelmed that you could connect so much with the story. This is just my first attempt in writing and looks like it leaves some impact at least.
Great man, looking forward to the next version of this one.