You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: My first attempt at writing a fiction story - Sally and ArpitoView the full contexthenry-gant (57)in #twentyfourhourshortstory • 7 years ago (edited)All I can say is that you have broken a contract with the reader.
May I ask what went wrong ? Just so that I can improve myself and learn from my mistakes.Thanks for your feedback @henry-gant.