I find your story very interesting, you have skills for writing suspense, and I loved the idea that the character was trapped in a kind of parallel and unknown world. Maybe being there gives him the opportunity to know new things, or the situation motivates him to invent a way to return to his original world. Thanks for sharing.
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It's the first time I get so many comments about a story. I'm glad you liked it
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