I am sure you will get better! I was not that good in the beginning, but practice makes perfect and I always try to improve (I don't think I will ever become perfect in writing. I just want to keep it decent and be able to pass my emotions through my words). And if you start reading more fiction in english and work with a dictionary to find synonyms and translate words from your language in english, I am sure you will see the difference very very soon (this is what helped me at least)
upvoted your comment, because I could not upvote your post :)
Hey @ruth-girl. I have written the next part of my story. Would love to have your inputs.