This is a beautiful work of fiction. I have not read a sci-fi novel before, but I love the idea that this one brings. I actually didn't want it to end. I was hopeful that it would continue. I guess this is just because of the contest limitations. You could give us a more comprehensive story later.
Well done @jadams2k18
You are right about the content length. It's not a bad idea to expand more the story later. Thanks for your kind words.