A Bowl Of Sunshine Mixed With a Little Hurricane
EXCELLENT title!!! Love it... pulled me right in and HAD to click to come read more. ;)
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A Bowl Of Sunshine Mixed With a Little Hurricane
EXCELLENT title!!! Love it... pulled me right in and HAD to click to come read more. ;)
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Thanks for appreciation
But content is not so good as per i think
I loved your content. Maybe it could be fleshed out a little bit more. I especially loved the first three lines.
How about making it sit for a day or so and then go back in and see what else comes to be added? Sometimes that's what I do for my own poetry and other writing.