Your contribution cannot be approved because it does not follow the Utopian Rules.
Hard rules broken:
- No benefit over their existing design. Your logo design more complicated and still generic. Lines are not visible in small sizes.
- There are many vectoral problems in your logo design
Suggestion:
- Try to do more benefits over their existing design
- Be careful about understandability
- Be sure the vectors are perfectly smooth
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