I like your concept, but I think the use of color does not help, and I also think the lines are too thin.
I've made a proposal too, if you want to give me your opinion visit my post
https://steemit.com/utopian-io/@camiloferrua/logo-design-or-comprendre-steem
Thanks 🙏 for kind review and comment. I will consider it for future contributions.