RE: LOOKING CLOSELY AT THE NUMBERS FROM STEEMHUNT

[jingis07]

Thank you for your review. The areas you raised concerns about would be taken care of in the next contribution. I am open to learning and your constructive criticisms are welcome.
Supply the examples, I am 100% interested.

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[didic]

I'm always happy to give examples!

I would be looking

You will be looking. "Would" implies that you want to, but won't for some reason.

Microsoft SQL Server Management Studio 17 was used to access the data from STEEMSQL ( a publicly managed database by @arcange ). Microsoft Excel 2016 was used to plot graphs and charts.

This isn't an error, but generally speaking, all things being equal, using the active form of the sentence is better. "I used" rather than "was used."

you would appreciate

Again, you "will" appreciate.

These products range from the latest mobile apps, websites, hardware projects, and tech creations.

If they "range from" they should also range to. I'd just write "include." Or maybe "products such as."

The pros and cons of the product are listed at the end of the post, other users can also make use of the comments to highlight the pros and cons

This should be split to two sentences. A period instead of the comma would work fine.

These are, as I wrote, examples. Similar issues appear throughout the post.