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RE: Review of RadioDroid

in #utopian-io5 years ago (edited)

Hello, @davidbarthy!

Thank you for your contribution to Utopian. This time you decided to promote RadioDroid, and I appreciate the information you have provided us with. I have never used this tool, but I have to admit that the user interface looks nice, and the application itself seems simple and easy to use. Your review is informative and well-illustrated with relevant screenshots.

In terms of content, even though I like all the information about the project itself, I have to say that I wanted to read a little bit more about your personal knowledge and views. Regardless, the post certainly contains unique information about your personal experience with this tool, and I appreciate the fact that you went the extra mile and provided an insightful comparison with SimpleRadio.

That said, I believe that your post could have been better written. First and foremost, you need to work on your paragraphing. When starting a new paragraph, you should either indent the first line, or leave a blank line. Furthermore, the post did have issues of style and proofreading, and I will cite a few examples:

Top click is the most trending radio stations that are listed in order according to the number of clicks.

Let me rephrase that: "The Top click option reveals the most trending radio stations listed in descending order according to the number of clicks."

You really should give RadioDroid a try and I bet you wouldn’t regret it!

This one should read: "You really should give RadioDroid a try and I bet you won't regret it!"

In conclusion, this is an interesting review, but there are areas where you can improve, and I hope this comment will help you with that. I look forward to your next contribution.

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Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!