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RE: [LINUX] Create own Linux Distribution Timeline Map [MANUAL]

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Thank you for your contribution! Below is our Utopian feedback:

  • This looks more like a tutorial, so you might want to use tutorials tag instead of task-documentation in the future
  • I liked the idea behind the project, had no idea it existed before. Loved the image of all those distros!
  • Your tutorial relies essentially on steps already described in the project itself, along with a bit more details of the actual install steps.
  • You have an incorrect image link in your post, not sure what this points at https://i.imgur.com/VgRID3s.png as the link does not resolve.
  • You had some explanatory English issues in your text, if you could look into improving those in the future would be great.
  • You could have also given a bit more description in your text about the project and its purposes. The title and short intro was fine, but I had to dig through the original projects to really understand what is happening here.

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Hello @mcfarhat! Thanks a lot for your precious comment on my work. Can you please state the correct tag: "tutorial" or "task-tutorial? Also I would like ask you to explain a little more on "explanatory English issues" so I could know what parts of my knowledge I have to improve (sorry, English is not my native language but I try to do my best to improve it). Thanks again for all advices I will take my time to improve everything in the future!

You're welcome @sxiii,
Regarding the tag, you can use tutorial or tutorials, both work.
For the English issues, yea its basically writing and/or spelling mistakes: "This time we gonna ", "It's quite old program", "All these updates still didn't broke", "please make this commands"

Thank you for your review, @mcfarhat!

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