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in #utopian-io7 years ago

That's great, @leveuf! Thanks for letting me know. Yes, it was understandable. It might be even better if you were able to use some of the markup formatting techniques to break the narrative up, and highlight some of the essential points, but that's not essential for understanding what you wrote. I will be watching for your chat message! Cheers!

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Thanks @Mitneb, yes I will improve the formating of the post, for now I have a category issue to solve, but I hope it will be fine! Cheers my friend I will be telling you more!! :)


Then, in the two places you have "beggin" change them to "began" for the correct tense. The proper spelling for the present tense is "begin". You do add an additional "n" when you want to spell "beginning." Don't you love how easy English is? Cheers!It's looking good now, @leveuf! You have a typing error in the first paragraph heading, and within that paragraph. Change the heading to read: How it Began (without the "?")(or if you wanted to keep the question you could say, "How did it begin?")

In the beginnig of the article I was begging for Help!!

Cheers and the best vibes!! :) Thanks so much for saving me @Mitneb, you are simply great!!

I am glad to be of help, @leveuf! Cheers and a big hug!