It's going great so far, learning a lot from actively working on the project and discussing the issues live on Discord.
For me its crucial to keep a close dialogue to the LM and the other translators, something that Discord and the DaVinci team are provinding perfectly.
It's also important to keep a workflow in the same project, at least until all the doubts are solved. As you pointed there, we did have some problems with pronouns, which we managed to solve.
Apart from that, another translator working on the same project would be appreciated. Not only so we can complete it faster, but so we can have more eyes over the problems, granting a better finished product.