Thank you for your contribution @intensely.
After reviewing your contribution, we suggest you following points:
Using the first person in the tutorials makes it difficult to understand the tutorials. We suggest using the third person in your text.
Nice work on the explanations of your code, although adding a bit more comments to the code can be helpful as well.
Code sections are better displayed using the code markup, instead of placing them as screenshots.
In the next tutorial ident your code. It is important to have the code idented so that the reader has a better perception of what you are developing.
Looking forward to your upcoming tutorials.
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Thanks for your advice, I hope to improve
Thank you for your review, @portugalcoin! Keep up the good work!