I have revised my design below , but it seems that there's a huge competition going on ,especially if you are competing with professional graphic artist. I am sure there would be no contest with beginners so i would decline my submission. Good to those who will submit. i will just show you my revised one and i think i have my limit.

My design might quite a newbie for those who are really into graphics but i am proud to show it to those who understands the stage of learning. We all know that people starts learning as a newbie and i believe no one has obtain such skills directly.
I think i'll better off with graphics for now, until i am fully equip to compete with professional graphic artist.
Brother, you have it..just work on sharpening your tools..keep it up!
thank you for the boost up, @tobaloidee . I will follow your advice. Thank you very much.