This is a decent review of the Activity diary application. I have read quite a few reviews about it, and I think this is certainly among the most detailed. I appreciate the effort.
You did great on the content side. The post contains useful information about the uses and features of the app. All well done! But, I have quite a few issues with the presentation. I will cite a few.
It’s not entirely true though. Because it doesn’t account for the breaks I usually.
As it is, the second sentence is incomplete. Also, I think a word is missing after- Usually.
I think is evident the developer had the app well thought out.
That sentence is unclear. Did you mean: I think it is evident that the developer had the app well thought out?
There are so many reasons why you’ll need a diary.
Reason and why means the same. You only need to choose one. The ‘’why’’ after ‘’reasons’’ is redundant. I noticed you used that in two or three sentences in the post. I suggest a more thorough check of your future texts.
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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!