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RE: WAISTLINE; A CALORIES COUNTING AND WEIGHT TRACKING APP.

in #utopian-io6 years ago (edited)

Hi nice2you,

Thank you for reviewing the waistline project. The waistline is a project I used to encounter while surfing the Github, but I never took the time to download and use. Well, your review shows the app is useful. I appreciate the time spent on writing and sharing your experiences.

Let's talk about the structure of the post.

The post contains massive paragraphs, which I believe you could break in some sections to ease the readability. Also, the images look distorted, and not correctly set. Some markdowns can help fix issues like that. You are supposed to source every external picture you used on the post.

Furthermore, I appreciate the short sentences, but a few of them are incomplete, which also hurt the readability. Some sentences that seem unclear. I'd advice you write clearly. While we want information in the Utopian blog category, we also wish to have quality writing.

I appreciate the effort used. I hope to see some improvement in your next publication.

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

Thanks for this awareness and i would look into the mistakes