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RE: QUIQQER week in review - 2019 / 10

in #utopian • 6 years ago

Thank you @lordneroo

That said, there were issues of style and proofreading. Regardless, you did a good job, and I appreciate the effort you put into your work. I look forward to your next contribution.

Can you give me some examples or improvements what I can do better next time?

I always try to do this as well as possible and I want to get better at writing. Especially when it comes to English. :-)

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     6 years ago (edited) 

    Hello!

    I will cite a few examples for you:

    He knows much and want to know more and he have even more answers to much.

    This sentence is pretty confusing. I think you meant to write: "He knows much and wants to know more, and has the answers to even more questions."

    So he tries to helping you find the needle in the STEEM pile.

    This sentence should read: "So he tries to help you find the needle in the STEEM pile."

    I hope you will find this comment useful.