Well done, the post looks pretty darn good for a "newbie"! I have the verve too. Now that this is in your back pocket already, I'd work on spacing a bit and fonts using the editor or the Markdown codes. Your choices of pictures were bang on and now you can start socializing more with us as this will only get you to be known for the goodness, love and light, that you are going to be sharing among us.
Welcome aboard the Steemit Train, no pressure, take your time, it is a slow but steadily growing process, exponential really. Plant these seeds and I can promise you, success is going to pop out of the earth in no time and, thus, the Steem shall roll!
Namaste :)
thanks dear