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Welcome to my musical channel @bigsteff
This is my Entry for Vibes Web3 music competition week 14
My submission on X
I'm doing a lovely and simple heart felt song by Sam Feldt. titled crying on the dance floor
I'm always full of joy that this vibes web3 music platform is where music can be expressed, enjoyed and shared. It's also encouraging and driving us for more musical creativity and Improvisations.
So, Enjoy Week 14 of the VIBES WEB3 Music competition
Remember this week we are doing a cover song of Sam Feldt.
And I choose to sing crying on the dance floor.
Lyrics
Tonight I won’t be crying on the dance floor
I ain’t got no time for no more sad songs
So let’s raise a glass to all the past one’s
But I won’t be crying on the dance floor
2x
It was a vow to make it out of the valley
Want to be at the top, like am hitting my prime,
Getting a lot of people wondering about what’s making me shine, message for the blind.
If they are ready for sight I guess they need enough faith couple with lot prayer
So we won’t be a denier of all the blessings from heaven, that makes me a king and bring shame to the devil
Whats can I do to change from this level
Before you win you must go through some battles
Don’t be fool at 40 make sure you follow the rules
This world is full of pains I can’t even trace the root.
You thing am alone with tears in my bed
Relieving all of the things that you said
But now that you’re gone I’ll be okay
Am gonna drink all my sadness away
Tonight I won’t be crying on the dance floor
I ain’t got no time for no more sad songs
So let’s raise a glass to all the past one’s
But I won’t be crying on the dance floor
3x
I won’t be crying on the dance floor
I won’t be crying on the dance floor
I won’t be crying on the dance floor
I won’t be crying
Tonight I won’t be crying on the dance floor
I ain’t got no time for no more sad songs
So let’s raise a glass to all the past one’s
But I won’t be crying on the dance floor
End.
Trust you will love it.
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@bigsteff
You gave a good solid effort in this entry
You gave us original lyrics with a bit of hip hop flow
and sang for us a cover song that I don't think anyone else in the contest covered
Which was nice to hear for a change
I appreciate your happy energy, good vibes and stylish flowing
Of course you have things to improve on
The tone and rhythm were slightly off for the singing, but don't worry
Your vocal tone is still being developed and you are still learning your range
Your rap was actually pretty thoughtful and shows your creative potential
Keep focusing on that area for future entries
Keep practicing, sharing and performing
And continue having fun!
I would like to see you keep improving
Check out this guide I wrote to help you improve your future entries
https://hive.blog/hive-140169/@verbal-d/official-cut-off-time-post-for-vibes-week-14-entries-cest-10-am-june-29th-2024-this-post-includes-entry-guidlines-for-new
-@Verbal-D: Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge
Thanks so much for your comment it mean a lot. I have not come on here for a while so I didn’t see this post to reply to. I never thought I would get a response from you cause I made mistake while posting on my week 14.
Thanks so much for coming through for me your words are bringing strength in the weak area of my music life.
Pls try to check my next entry I made a post today