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First of all, if you are summarizing an article provide some context. I do not know what you are talking about and I was honestly interested in where exactly all this was coming from. Also, look at this quote: “And when there's a problem instead of courts and equity, people have only vigilante justice or biting the lose as tools in they box.”

I can assume what you are saying but it is choppy and incoherent and again I was left asking myself, what is going on here? If it is a case that you wanted to be poetic I could understand, but when summarizing an article I am not certain if this is the right approach.

There are other examples but I won’t get into them. I was also looking at the first and second part of your article. I assume you are trying to say that a lot of cannabis is being sent through the postal system, but then, again, so what? Are you trying to say that the authorities should lay off this one guy because so much ganja is being transported through the mail? I can only assume that this is what you are saying. I am not getting it. It all seems to disjointed.

I personally am opposed to prohibition, and hence I am interested in finding out how the PTB are fighting it. I have other stuff to say, but in a nutshell, some context would have been appreciated and you could have tightened the piece and bring the first and second sections together to make it flow. Sorry if I came off as being harsh, but I love my green and I want to know what is going on with it.

Peace man. I will follow and read up on your stuff.

i thought having source was clear where it was coming from, thanks for the follow and reads and for your ideas!! Yea sorry summarizing and adding my own voice, so dual purposes.

The main goal of drug war stories is to tell the stories of the victims of this mass madness.

No problem man. I would just love a deeper story. A real face to see exactly what these assholes in authority are doing. Peace.