I was hoping someone would have Toby and Jan fall in love! Well told, and I love the happy ending. The prediction of the silvery moon is a nice touch ✨🌒
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I was hoping someone would have Toby and Jan fall in love! Well told, and I love the happy ending. The prediction of the silvery moon is a nice touch ✨🌒
Thanks very much! The prompt was a pleasure to work with, full of little details suggesting possible directions. It was this line something about the disappointment in her eyes that struck him that suggested the Jan/Toby love angle.