Ya mon, you made the right decision bringing her on board me thinks.. I watched both videos and I've seen some of your past ones... No surprise that it seems more polished and "interesting" as an edited version.
Not that there was anything necessarily "wrong" with you previous videos...I assume that for most it's just easier to stay engaged with edits and music and shorter vids.
That's why an overwhelming amount of movies, TV shows and music videos tend to have an edit every 3-5 seconds or so. OR radio edits for longer songs that they want to be singles etc. Most ppl won't find it as entertaining to watch a bunch of long takes or hear a 7 minute song on the radio anymore lol.
I'm guilt of the that for sure sometimes! In fact i've recently started to watch youtube videos on 1.5-2x speed. I just can't get through or don't have time to sit through an hour long video of some guy talking about the newest cryptos or how to build a house extension haha
Can cram that into my head in half the time by speeding it up, or in your case, u do it for your followers by talking out some stuff ;)
I feature a bit of you in my next post - As long as you actually do like sandwiches in real life and aren't just faking it for steemit.
What would you think if I told you that I'm actually eating a sandwich right now...?
And I'll just add this here now that it's been posted lol ;)
https://steemit.com/thedailymanwich/@jaybird/the-daily-manwich-cheesy-brie-manwich-and-side-of-kettle-chips
Must be real! I'll check it out!