I read through it, not too bad. I wish it were more on-chain.
Also not wild about this:
Nominees need to be public individuals with no criminal record, and cannot be corporates, proxies or anonymous members.
Having to dox yourself to be on the board.
There's a few ways that anonymous users in my proposal can contribute to the Foundation the most obvious being participating in dev bounties.
However touching money, keys, bylaws or even being listed in a legal entity in any country by default requires a disclosure of identity.
Participating in a DAO project can be another option for anonymous users - Foundation could then support the DAO financially.
Also you have an option to keep your anonymous and your public identities separate.