I'm glad to see you indulging your inclination toward poetry. It is evident when you write prose--the use of metaphor and onomatopoeia come naturally to you, whereas other writers strain to use these tools. To you they are not tools, but organic means of expression.
I think each of these poems is brilliant. Gems packed with expression.
UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments!
Poetry is really nice to write when I don’t exactly feel like hashing out a story. And yeah, I do notice that there are writers that struggle to not use the full arsenal to write things out with all the tools given to them. While for me, I like to integrate these tools and show the power they can have for both message and eye-candy if they are respected and given life. Regarding all that, I thank you for thinking them brilliant and look forward to you reading my other prose and poems ~UwU~ Mwah! <3