Another wonderful piece of writing. The more I read the more I am involved in your fantastic Novel. Your use of idioms and phrases in sentences are worth appreciating as well e.g. 'A thought "flitted across" his mind, 'Darius "gaped for" a brief moment. I really appreciate your efforts to bring a wonderful piece of fiction on the platform of Steemit so that more people can enjoy the pleasure of reading a good book. Stay blessed.
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