I had stopped commenting because I thought you might not be returning. Since you do put in a rare appearance, I just might post a few more comments.
In general, I like your imagination and I look forward each time to find out what you will have thought of. However, you do not favour adding human interest and there is hardly any dialogue. Why don't you partner with someone who enjoys writing about people? Many great authors have partnered, so it is not something anyone would frown upon.
I seem to recall you mentioning a book...is it close to publication?