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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure 2: Dark Corners, Part 7

in #writing7 years ago

This "The eyes snapped open and it shrieked.", and surrounding lines/scene remind me so much of the Puppet Masters movie with Donald Sutherland, (a good movie). Is it the being that is putting James in the mind of Rod, or is James doing it himself. I think a bit of both, because he is in the dream realizes it, and yet does not so much realize it when he is in the dream. The dream retention though, that is something I would like to have, to be able to really remember a dream.