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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure 2: Dark Corners, Part 8

in #writing7 years ago

For a few minutes there I kept expecting to hear Buffalo Bob's voice say "it rubs the oil upon itself". Now the question James is likely mulling, does he follow Olvia into the black pool, and face the unknown, or does he do nothing and face the knowing torture that Remmer is inflicting on him. A kind of damned if you do, damned if you don't moment.