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RE: The balance or the dominance of darkness and light , a short story of fiction

in #writing7 years ago

I liked how it was all so dark, and meaningless to people at the beginning, then the reaching out to offer help for one man in dire need. Being there for the people, but the people ignoring them, until one man accepted the offer of help. Then how for a little while people asked, then slowly, they stopped, thus the cycle renews itself again, from balance to imbalance, such is life as we live it.

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Yeah, humans have shorter memory-spans than we want to admit and sometimes we make the same mistake a couple of times before learning a lesson. Sad, but after enough times we do learn