Such a good set-up, let people feel her fear, then her hesitancy, then see her fortitude. up next bravery? Strength? well I already see her as strong, as I am sure others do also. But the nagging question, Why, and what is she going to do. I think next chapter is gonna be one doozy of one.
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You see, you're asking questions about her as you become more embroiled in her story. Thank you, you can see what's happening... but you're getting immersed :)