This story takes a while to play out, I hope you enjoy it.
Hero's and Fools (6)
7 years ago in #writing by bleedpoet (60)
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I like the format of this poetry. It's very interesting how you remembered the lines. The photography is also interesting ad. Great job!
Alas it's not quite poetry, but rather a script I tried to write, all fiction.
As for the photos... I've been growing a beard and 'stach for the last few months and today I decided enough.
Well I like it... It's interesting. Keep writing. As far as the facial hair I can't relate LOL but I'm glad you were able to rid yourself of it if you were done.
xP ...and just like that you were a 15 year old boy again. Nice ummm unbuttoned pants shot?
I had my long johns underneath and underwear under that... I just got to a point where I looked in the mirror and said 'Fuck that mange, fuck it to hell off my face'
I sometimes feel that way about all my hair. Just want to cut it all off and start with something fresh and light. And I was kidding about the age 15 thing but I would probably still card you lol.
Bald is really in this year, sorry, you can't borrow my clippers.
I'd like to but I'd look pretty one sided cause of the ear. Need a little bit of hair to balance.
Is it weird that I got a bit flushed from reading this? Well, that and seeing your shirtless pic lol.
Love you without the beard
It's a little weird you got flushed reading dialogue between to lovers walking across frozen ground bickering like an old married couple, but just a little weird, and that's par for the course around here.
I'm sad to see you haven't gotten a chance to follow through on your travel blogs, I was certain with @sweetssj as your guidance we'd see you on a beautiful beach in your polka dots🙂
Thanks for your vote of confidence on going beardless, it makes me look much younger, but I still feel awfully old.
Well I love drama so it makes a lot of sense ;)
I'm sad too too! I've been doing these stupid modeling gigs none stop for the past few months and as a result, I haven't had any time to really travel or blog about it.
Do keep the beard off cutie, I like them young