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RE: [Original Novel] Metal Fever 2: The Erasure of Asherah, Part 6

in #writing6 years ago

There are so many words in this story i just have to google out before i could understood it. And thats what i like most in stories, learning new things everyday. Your choice of desciption too is what i like.

I heard nothing like the cacophony of jet engines(i dont think jet-like machine should still be making some sounds at this age). Nor had I seen the usual drum shaped protuberances slung beneath its wings(you're talking of the turbine, the engine, right?) Thinking back to the electrically levitated air taxi(do you mean an aeroplane?) I realized yet again the extent of what can happen in six years and set about ordering a ticket through my ocular interface.

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He is saying the flying taxi has no engines and makes no noise, because of how far technology advanced while he was in prison.

OK, thanks.