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RE: The balance or the dominance of darkness and light , a short story of fiction

in #writing7 years ago

This was a lovely story. The mage never wavering in her course is a great tale of perservence. I enjoyed how you wove a reflection of how, just to avoid the possible judgement of others, people will make horrible decisions. What a difference one hand reaching out to accept help can make!

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Yeah, we sure have our priorities in a little bit of a weird order, especially when judgment is involved, for some reason it is a big fear for a lot of people.