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RE: Mistress of Magic: Morgan's First Apprentice - Chapter 8 - A Part for The Sisterhood [NSFW]

in #writing7 years ago

I love how the outer weather seems to match her inner weather - the thunder and lightning, then the gentle rain after the storm. I also love the foreshadowing. At the time, that didn't seem worrying to me, only odd. to me, that sounds like later on she'll see reason to worry... to feel less safe than she does now. Looking forward to the next installment!