Home (an original poem)

in #writing • 8 years ago

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Home is not the same anymore
Even these mountains have changed

The number of familiar faces
Less than before

Vacant businesses more and more
Homes in despair

Once a thriving place
Now the fight is gone

Maybe its time to move on
Since home is not the same anymore

photo taken my me

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     8 years ago (edited) 

    Nice. Tim! Thats a good share.

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     8 years ago  

    Thank you!

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     8 years ago  

    Such a beautiful poem! The denial and then the acceptance.

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     8 years ago  

    Just not the same - to be true!

    Find out about it here where there is also a poetry dice challenge!I curate poetry with the tag #onehumanbasket

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     8 years ago  

    good poem about losing that homely feeling. I've felt like this before and it was when I was in a place where I didn't belong. you reminded me of that time... 😀

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     8 years ago  

    click here!This post received a 3.8% upvote from @randowhale thanks to @timbot606! For more information,

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