Very nice job. In creative writing I have a hard time choosing names. Targus really just rings easily and identifiable.
Lately, I have been reading a Guardians of the Galaxy and X-Men crossover comic, The Targyns are a lot like the Shi'ar, a planet of super humanoids with mutant-like varieties.
Oh, interesting. I just started thinking of how Humans might evolve in a different system and then thought to myself "What if there are other elements out there that we haven't discovered that they could provide a bridge between the people and their surroundings?"
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