Nice mood creation, working the backstory in with the description is a pro move. There's the feel of double-entendre, especially in the last paragraph. This is good work.
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Nice mood creation, working the backstory in with the description is a pro move. There's the feel of double-entendre, especially in the last paragraph. This is good work.
Thank you! Flash is, by far, my favourite form to play around with.
I hate flash, because it's so very hard. I don't feel like I do it well. I like to marinate my stories, and flash is nothing but a broil and go.
It's all about the entry point and exit point. I'm going to do a post on flash writing soon!
You can bet I'll be watching for that.