POEM - Good Night

in #writing7 years ago

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Good night all
Who entered the night
Tear off hushed husks
With a kicking tab kalam

Good evening all of you
The scavenger said
Hardener sweat glands
Until dry like a clothesline

Good night poor people
The unconscious was strangled by the price of basic food
Dijerat market economy
Loss

It's night's night too
Brothers sleep after the last stanza
After writing an out-of-date inspiration
You go ahead

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Good rythm and structure - after writing an out-of-date reply - you go ahead. And take good care.