Inner sections

in #writing6 years ago (edited)

Inner sections

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original poetry by @d-pend
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featuring images by
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  paikan07, narandel, and LaurensSpruit


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Inner sections


Peering into domains chained
by linguistic wireframes,
sought succinctly by neon wings
aspiring escape over slant-lanes.

           Dark,
dark in the mind—
and someone crying out with some other voice
from mine from inside me,
           lined.

Pedaling foot over fossils,
rapid melodies whirling within.
Still I deny semantics crumbling,
to slow the shock of my rabid mend.

          Still,
still in the soul—
and someone plunged into the toilsome depths
with my bodied tome,
          surreal.

The present, a pristine utterance
of hellacious dimension unfurled.
Chase me in radical tones;
purport the allure of immediate zones.


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Written by
@d-pend
7/23/18
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Art credits

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  1 — "Neon" by paikan07
  2 — "Neon Tokyo" by narandel
  3 — "Retro Future" by LaurensSpruit

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You did it again @d-pend^^ You are producing a poem every day.

Everything from the title to the pictures, even the sounds of the words flow together to one mind boggling inner section not to be confused with intersection. The play on words keeps us wondering and finally draws us into your fanatic "shock"...

Boom

and someone plunged into the toilsome depths
with my bodied tome

How can this be your journal?

I would write something like:

I wasn't feeling well today
Sometimes I'm not myself
I wonder who I am and why I do the things I do
Who knows if this heat is hell
I can't take it anymore

But then I am not @d-pend.
Your poems always keep me on the edge (a good place to be^^)
This one reminds me of the movie Blade Runner

Roy Batty:

I've seen things you people wouldn't believe. Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion. I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate. All those moments will be lost in time, like tears in rain...

"Internal Sections" speaks of dissection, of separation, in batches, of the internal. I feel the intention to bring to light a pretext to float in the artificial, from the darkness. An illumination in the expression that is not such, because its meaning is not essential. There is a kind of duality, a kind of contrast between old and new forms, but in both, a single poetic self. However, the consciousness of the settlement prevails in the now, today, clearly defined and identified with a new state of the soul, one capable of recognizing itself.

The present, a pristine utterance
of hellacious dimension unfurled.

There is a disposition to open up to the new times, to set out in new ways. A future is built from this conscious present, this present so present in the projected life, in the here and now that promotes changes.

Chase me in radical tones;
purport the allure of immediate zones.

It is so rewarding to contemplate the rebirth, the resurgence as a conscious event, built with desire, with hope in the future. There are no longer fears, there is faith and in that there is spiritual greatness.

Very nice poetry.... Plus the post image is awesome.....

d-pend Excellent poetry with good writing , the images are emprecionates, beautiful, with wonderful colors thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry with us all, happy day

nice poem...love to read

wow! fabulous one!!

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Thanks for sharing! Enjoy reading your post.

Your poetry is beautiful, but I am curious to know if it is the sub-conscious and the constant concern of the uncertain future, in any way is an excellent job :)

nicely DONE! the images is very futures-liked or movie-liked.

Excellent verses. I really liked it. Sorry my knowledge of English does not allow to fully appreciate their beauty. Good luck to you and Love.

Превосходные стихи. Мне очень понравилось. Жаль мое знание английского языка не позволяет в полной мере оценить их красоту. Удачи Вам и Любви.

@d-pend it's beautiful poetry. I like it. And thanks

Wow your words go through the hearts,your writing skills are amazing

You are a good & deep poet who are so deep meaning peotry i like lt and will now see your post daily as i am also a writer ,

I'm wearing your writing. It's really great.